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Margherita
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0 posted 2009-11-08 09:28 AM



    


***


Made for dancing


***
Love notes hang in the air.
Like snowflakes they melt
on the tip of my tongue
and while the sound expands
my body begins to dance.

I am conscious of cosmic pulses
steering my every move
into harmony’s embrace.
I greet the constellations
while I stretch and grow
like an ethereal flower
opening my petals to their gaze.

My breath connects
to the breath of Universe.
My voice rises and hums along
with the primordial sounds
reverberating across space.
I hear the voices of multitudes
humming their own soul tunes.

Lifted up by deep heart sighs
I feel like a ropedancer
in perfect balance
totally free of fears
sharing kisses and smiles.

Your beloved hands
gently frame my face
your eyes mirror in mine
our lips part to exchange
tender whispers of love
together now we dance.

Infinity’s touch
lifts us into immortality.
We know we are love
and we know we are
made for dancing.
With our bodies entwined
we defeat gravity
and soar through space
in freedom and grace.

Somewhere down there
on the blue planet
the children we have been
still gather snowflakes and feathers
and their laughter echoes
through life’s multiple levels.

Rooted in divine energies
we are meant to dance.
Let us join our hands
and dance and dance and dance …


***

© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-11-08 09:53 AM


My dear Dolphina, you truly are a cosmic princess. I literally have tears in my eyes from the divine beauty of this poetic treasure ~ which I am most assuredly tucking away for safe-keeping.

God bless you for the grace, wisdom, and pulchritude that you radiate upon Mother Earth ~ and beyond.

~ As you love, so may you be loved.



Linda Angelo Terrestre xo


Margherita
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2 posted 2009-11-08 10:13 AM


Sweet Linda Angelo Terrestre, you bless me!
"Cosmic princess" wow that sounds fascinating!
No doubt you are a most wonderful dancing partner for cosmic dancing parties! And your feathers are of the most brilliant kind!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2009-11-08 11:08 AM


This is exquisite! Into my library, to read again at my leisure.
You've made me want to dance on the milky way today!

martiniat8
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4 posted 2009-11-08 11:56 AM


Rooted in divine energies
we are meant to dance.

vandana
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5 posted 2009-11-08 12:02 PM


nice read
2islander2
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6 posted 2009-11-08 01:42 PM


hello Margherita, looks like an invitation for brotherhood and love, could you be heard and the world would be a better place, enjoyed your spiritful poem and some kind of equation to resolve with love.

thanks

yann

Margherita
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7 posted 2009-11-08 04:51 PM


Thank you, dear Kacy, for telling me you enjoyed my dancing visions. I felt inspired to write this while meditating, feeling intensely love's invitation to "be light" "to dance" "to love" ...

Dear Brad, thank you, it's nice that you stopped by!

Dear vandana, thank you, I appreciate your touch of kindness.

Dear Yann, yes you read this well, we must grow in the awareness of love's power. Thank you so much! You dance with grace through life, as you show with your own words.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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8 posted 2009-11-08 09:13 PM




Infinity’s touch
lifts us into immortality.
We know we are love
and we know we are
made for dancing.
With our bodies entwined
we defeat gravity
and soar through space
in freedom and grace.

What a beautiful stanza from a beautiful

poem dear Margherita, a joy to read, Love.

Lindsay

GBride
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9 posted 2009-11-09 07:05 AM


"...the children we have been
still gather snowflakes and feathers."
What a delightful line.
My,My, what a jewel we have in you at pip!

AncientHippie
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10 posted 2009-11-09 03:22 PM


Margherita, this is a wonderful piece of art.  You are sipping from a nectar that I well recognise.  Great treatment of the subject matter here, with the pulse of the Universe shining through your inspired words.
Namaste
Jim

"We are stardust:  we are golden:  and we've got to get ourselves back to the garden."  --Joni Mitchell "Woodstock"

Kosmic888
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11 posted 2009-11-09 03:45 PM


This is indeed an exceptional piece; rooted in a deep intuition of the Divine dancing her/his lover to everlasting heights of Divine, Love, Bliss...  Strong imagery, metaphor and simile combine to make this read a dazzling experience in a place very few get to see, feel, and hear. Bravo!
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2009-11-09 06:05 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Poetal
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13 posted 2009-11-09 06:34 PM


We all can say your poem is refreshing and poetic as you share thoughts of dance another one of the arts. Thanks for the read.

AL Inmon

viking_metal
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14 posted 2009-11-09 11:38 PM


wonderful.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison
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15 posted 2009-11-10 04:20 AM


Dance on, beautiful one - and continue to share the magic inside you.

Love,
Alison

Marchmadness
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16 posted 2009-11-10 06:04 PM


My granddaughter is a dancer. I'm sending her this lovely poem. I know she will enjoy it as much as I have. Beautiful.
                                 Ida

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17 posted 2009-11-12 02:35 AM


This is an absolutely beautiful and creative poem.
jwesley
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18 posted 2009-11-12 02:43 AM


Beautiful, my friend...especially enjoyed...

'Somewhere down there
on the blue planet
the children we have been
still gather snowflakes and feathers
and their laughter echoes ...'

j.

nourzihane
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19 posted 2009-11-12 12:27 PM


Dear Margherita

I stand here

to
Applaud strongly

and to say

you and your words

a valuable pearls

thanx

love .. hug
Nourzihane

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20 posted 2009-11-12 10:29 PM


Goodness woman! If I could make this into a poster and hang it on my wall, I surely would! This is gorgeous! I am so glad you are you Margherita!
Balladeer
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21 posted 2009-11-12 10:41 PM


Wow...you had me with you at every step. What a beautiful presentation!
Margherita
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22 posted 2009-11-14 10:50 AM


Dear Lindsay, thank you for telling me you enjoyed this read ... dance along!

Dear GBride, thank you so much for your kind words. They remove the dust on this "jewel" and it shines in gratitude.

Namaste, dear Jim! Such a generous and loving comment! Thank you from my heart.

Dear Kosmic888, I savored your most kind reply, thank you so much for dancing along.

Thank you, dear James. From Hawaii maybe it is even easier to reach the infinity of the skies and dance in upper spheres!

Dear Poetal, nice to have you visiting my post and receiving such a refreshing comment. Thank you so much!

Wunderschön? Danke, Paul!

My dear Alison, it's such a joy to share and to have you dancing along, showing me more magic places to visit. Thank you!

Dear Ida, may your granddaughter fly high while dancing! Thank you so much for sharing the poem with her too!

Thank you, dear Lamar, for your kind comment. I appreciate your visits.

Dear Jimmy, thank you so much, yes like children we should never forget our ability to dance in bliss.

Dear Nourzihane, thank you from my heart for your joyous reply that brings smiles.

You touch my heart, dear Dixie, with your loving comment. Yes, it is important to remember always that indeed we are meant to dance, even when we are seemingly stuck in darkness. One step, two steps, etc. etc. and we move into the light again in no time.

Dear Balladeer, now that was a wonderful surprise to have you visiting here and leaving such a generous heartfelt comment! Thank you so much!

Love and joy to all. Enjoy your weekend!

Margherita

Martie
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23 posted 2009-11-14 08:10 PM


Margherita...your grace and charm just are!!
suthern
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24 posted 2009-11-14 10:24 PM


This is simply stunning!!! *S* Beautiful work!!
Margherita
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25 posted 2009-11-17 01:03 PM


Dear Martie and dear Ruth, thank you from my heart for your appreciation!
Hugs to both.
Margherita   

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