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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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0 posted 2009-09-13 09:54 PM


(im gdcod2player forgot password to email)


I cant hear the sound of your voice
I lost it on my way to Hell
What a ride for me
How much more can this heart take of your accomplishments

I lost you over night
College has taken all I've gotten away
You'll never be forgotten

I have never felt so restless
This pain wont wipe away
I have lost all i had

The park full of gallows is calling
How dull will the blades be
Can i just go Home?



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-14 09:26 AM


The pain is deeply felt. Well written.

Love,
M

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-09-14 10:00 AM


You write of your pain so vividly that I can almost feel it.
Whenever I have gone through dark times, I hang onto to the hope that brighter days will come along ~ and they do! Hang in there. May your brighter days be just around the corner.


EA

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