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ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
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Maharashtra,India

0 posted 2009-09-13 10:27 AM



MY MOTHER LAND

Words to describe you ,my mother is insufficient,
Variety found within you takes years to be discovered,
Lovely, incredible , you mother are magnificent,
The world looks to you for problems they have encountered.

Still you remain aloof and unknown,
Proud race you have nourished through centuries,
Though hardships abound will you we never disown,
Within each soul lies wisdom as bounties.

Your festivals astound the world ,vibrant are your colours,
Little are our wants, totally we submit to our destiny,
Harmony in every heart ,nowhere are loners,
A smile lights up every face throughout life’s journey.

Villages may lack comfort and aminities,
Many a soul may be illiterate and ignorant,
Happy with their lot not bothered about facilities,
Whatever returns hard work brings is sufficient.

Life is a struggle for most,
Time no one has for useless thought,

For you it does not matter if lives are lost,


To safeguard your honour through centuries we have fought.

Love for you resides deep in every heart,
Tolerance and love for each other is infinite,
No power on earth can our unity thwart,
Alert are we to save your honour every minute.


© Copyright 2009 ESHA SEN GUPTA - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2009-09-13 11:55 AM


beautiful and accurate, THanks ESha for sharing your talent.

yann

Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
2 posted 2009-09-13 02:58 PM


Yes do your homeland justice with this lovely poem, a grand read.
Heart2Heart

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2009-09-13 10:18 PM



Dear Esha, where would be without mothers,
they are the backbone of all nations and

very often not fully appreciated. A great post my dear. Love and a big hug.

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-09-13 10:39 PM


A rousing, patriotic write, dear Esha!

I have single out my two favourite lines ~

"Love for you resides deep in every heart,
Tolerance and love for each other is infinite"



Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-09-14 09:08 AM


quote:
Your festivals astound the world, vibrant are your colours,
Little are our wants, totally we submit to our destiny,
Harmony in every heart, nowhere are loners,
A smile lights up every face throughout life’s journey.



This is very beautiful, dear Esha. May this love and harmony be the only tools ever needed to preserve your homecountry's characteristics.

Love,
Margherita

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

6 posted 2009-09-14 06:33 PM


Yes, Esha you write a very good poem.
Your motherland is very important for world stability and peace.

priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
Posts 216
india
7 posted 2009-10-05 05:30 PM


I feel to say I'm from this beautiful land.
Makes me proud to just belong...
A wonderful write...
I'm speechless...
Such beautiful thoughts...
This is what I call my wonderland..

Thank you for sharing your thoughts Ma'm.


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