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Why he loves her
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Why he loves her |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
She probably wonders as she ponders wondering what to do Why he calls her sweetheart why he writes, I love you who is to say what makes the heart feel this way when a writer writes the words are revealed what fits in to place is how they truly feel there may be a moment a simple second stutter until it feels just right these words that we utter we could list all the reasons and everything under the sun but it's a mirrored murmur moment from when she called him, "Hun" [This message has been edited by martiniat8 (09-14-2009 12:36 AM).] |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Brad who is to say what makes the heart feel this way . good question  love these lines you laid down: 'a simple second stutter' and 'a mirrored murmur moment' enjoyed.. Shel |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
thanks, Shell. I changed the last line so it reads a little better |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Brad, I am so glad that I read "just one more" before bed. This is wonderful and I really enjoyed it. Alison |
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