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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-09-12 03:27 PM




I want to bask in the warmth of your love,
smell the white lillies in your hair,
taste the berries of happiness upon your lips,
lay with me in golden fields,

Gazing into the white cloudy sky,
while images of our deepest imagination,
pass and float on by,
let me hear loves' laughter,

Laughter from the deepest part of you,
your eyes filled and overflowing with it,
joy, tears, tickling you inside out,
laugh with me into forever.

As the day unfolds, take my hand to hold,
pull it close, press it against your heart,
promise me of your love so true,
Seal it with a kiss, as the sun melts into night sky,

Watch my lips in the mist of darkness,
as they whisper "I Love You",
simple, happy love,
forever love, of just you and I.

© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
GBride
Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-09-12 10:23 PM


A beautiful write of romantic love.
I've never seen one better!!!

Heart2Heart
Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
2 posted 2009-09-13 03:04 PM


A beautiful love poem, your words make a deep impression on me tonight.
Heart2Heart

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2009-09-13 03:13 PM


Beautiful thoughts expressed here my friend, very much enjoyed today.

Rick

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-09-15 03:57 PM


BEAUTIFUL is all I have to say!


ARCTIC WIND

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