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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2009-09-11 03:18 PM




I always called the aurora borealis
my Rainbow Dancing Lights.
But at midnight on September 11, 2001,
the aurora was a pale green monochromatic
short-lived dancing wave
accompanied by thousands of stars
in a freezing clear midnight blue sky.

Then the dancing lights took on a different hue.
They suddenly became a colorful Rainbow of Hearts.
The stars became the souls of lost innocents,
and the aurora was their wave of goodbye.
I stood in awe,
still in shock and disbelief
at the events of September 11,
asking "Why?"

Then I heard weeping 'round the world
from loved ones left behind,
as the souls that burned brightly in the sky
also questioned "Why?"

No answers came..
though I looked to the sky each night
asking "Why?"
Now when I look for the twinkling stars
and the dancing northern lights
I cry a silent goodbye,
yet keep asking
"Why?"

Will there ever be
an acceptable reply?

© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-09-11 04:26 PM


grand-eternal questions! ...

effective and timely 'tribute' write

serious applause for this 'penning' !!

GBride
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2 posted 2009-09-12 02:15 AM


When will we ever get an answer to the senseless loss of the innocents?
Loved your thoughtful poem!!!

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-09-12 06:29 AM


quote:
Then the dancing lights took on a different hue.
They suddenly became a colorful Rainbow of Hearts.
The stars became the souls of lost innocents,
and the aurora was their wave of goodbye


How absolutely touching, dear Kacy.

Beautifully done. No, it is difficult to find adequate answers. The root of all evil resides in the incapacity of humans to really love and respect their neighbour and in the lack of awareness that we all are One, coming from the same Source.

So, instead of evolving together and sustaining each other, we still tend to destroy each other.

Thank you for this intense write.

Love,
Margherita

brneyedgrly
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4 posted 2009-09-12 10:44 AM



always enjoy everything you write kacy

                


martiniat8
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5 posted 2009-09-12 11:52 AM


though the world did cry
for the blood that spilled
from those that died

tragedy comes
everyday
natural disasters
or those man made

the days give way
so we might say

though pretense
may have been false
there has been good
hence

when we reassure
the recompense

a tyrant fell
down the noose's
well

and a land
now free

people see
a world has become

what they
CHOOSE it

to be...

LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-09-12 09:10 PM



Then I heard weeping 'round the world
from loved ones left behind,
as the souls that burned brightly in the sky
also questioned "Why?"

Dear Kacy, that is such a powerful poignant write. I often wonder myself why people commit such devasting tradgedys, and ninety nine per cent is carried out in the name of religion. Allah Ackba indeed. I'm sure God must frown on all those crazy mixed up people who commit atrocities in his name.
A very good thought provoker this one my dear. Love.

Lindsay

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7 posted 2009-09-13 12:25 PM


Hello Midnitsun, I was shocked too and still am I, thanks for recalling and asking "why?"

yann

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2009-09-13 12:29 PM


Thank you each, for spending a moment here.

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9 posted 2009-09-13 10:12 PM


Kacy, you are a poetess through and through. There are several aspects of you that enable you to write as you do.
~ a loving, compassionate heart
~ acute powers of observation
~ your love of Nature ~ and people!
~ your God-given creative talent for writing
~ your ability to see both sides of situations
~ your yin and yang are well-balanced
~ You are intelligent
~ your humanitarianism
~ your pro-active nature
~ your spirituality
~ your innate wisdom ....and the list goes on!


Linda

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10 posted 2009-10-12 10:41 PM




(shrugs shoulders sadly) No.........I don't believe there ever will, but for the simple fact that we, together, are pondering this very question regardless with solemn transfixed stares..........I am hopeful, as a global community, that we are conscious enough to someday come to our senses and mend and heal this wounded world over and see to it we don't come to this aching rhetorical impasse again!

(huggies) You are a true beacon to the world, my friend. I am, as always, blessed to know you and have you as a friend!

XOXO,
Lisping Hibiscus

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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11 posted 2009-10-13 08:55 PM


LInda! Now you made me blush. I jist try to be a world citizsen with an appreciation of all the beauty of diversity we've been given.

Noah, as you well know,we still have to keep the goal in plain view, and strive to change hearts and mindsets.

OwlSA
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12 posted 2009-10-14 12:23 PM


I don't know how I missed this one, Kacy.  A beautiful poem by a compassionate poet with a pure soul, Kacy.  God gave us freedom of choice, but sadly, some people abuse it.  As I have said so often, if human civilisatoin could one day rise to the level of Vervet monkeys (or any other animals), what a wonderful world we would have.

Owl

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