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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-09-11 07:25 AM



it wasn't that I wanted to be the only one
that you wanted to be the only one with
I only wanted to be always the last one

when you were back from your exploring
or visits to the crazy side of wondering
and your hands were dirty from touching

and when you found out everything you wanted
and reapplied the formula repeatedly again
to be sure it was as wonderful as you thought

and then came back with your fragile exposed
just needing some understanding acceptance
and someone to help you finish your statement

when you found yourself open and needed closing


_______________

daark (eyes of tao)



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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-11 10:20 AM


Your words trasude sensuous sacredness and your guidance inspires trust.

Your poem is like a session of blissful BEING, which I fear not many are able to achieve.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-09-11 10:27 AM


Ms mar. Thank you special lady
Indigo
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3 posted 2009-09-11 01:12 PM


her gown, wind-whipped threads
caught in the branches of him
now ribbons of want.

Did anyone ever tell you you have a way with words? ;-)

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-09-11 01:53 PM


Ms indi, thank you babe, perhaps they just have their way with me?


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2009-09-11 03:13 PM


*sigh*  just lovely, Mr Daark.

Bisous du Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-09-11 03:36 PM


ms r&b...thanks lady friend
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2009-09-11 03:59 PM


Well heck, that's enough to make a girl come undone!

You're somethng else, DS~ and that's a good thing!!

Hug~

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-09-11 04:04 PM


ms bluezy...
thanks babe..you are something else too

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9 posted 2009-09-13 04:04 PM


D

You make a woman want to go away, just so she can return.  That's pretty amazing.

Thank you for sharing the parts of you that you do share when you do.

A

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2009-09-14 07:43 AM


ms ali-san..well most of them forgot about returning..lol  thanks little one
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