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Falling rain
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0 posted 09-10-2009 07:29 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This I my first time posting in this forum.   Happy to hear some feedback. Sorry about the improper punctuations.  

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Have you ever felt the rain
Drip down like heavens tear
Watch it glitter in the light
The beauty of the world appears

Admire the many hues dance
Across the blades of grass
Precious moments forever caught
As the minute-hand pass

Have you felt the vibrations
Of laughter shake your soul
The sound of it ringing
The feeling filling you whole

Have you ever stand on the edge
Took a breath and take a leap
The wind rocking you with ease
Into a subtle, gentle sleep

Have you ever wished
To have an endless night
Cherish the moments a tad longer
Bathing in the pale moonlight

Have you ever felt the way
I do. Seeing beauty in simplicity
To feel at peace for once
Despite how the world's faulty
© Copyright 2009 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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1 posted 09-10-2009 07:34 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Well welcome to Open Poetry! ~ A wonderful place to express loving thoughts and beautiful imagery. Also, the dark poetry that looms over ones head.

I really like the light in your poem. Very upbeat and wonderful


ARCTIC WIND
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2 posted 09-12-2009 06:11 AM       View Profile for Suncleaver   Email Suncleaver   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suncleaver

Hey Zach.

Loved the light and hope in this poem.

ps. stop spamming my messenger with fake pictures of me. :p

You'd recognise me if you saw me. Six foot, military hair, over 200 pounds (<3 the weight training), and heavily tattooed and pierced. Oh... and don't forget the leather trousers. :p

'Wailing voices on the wind, urging me to turn. Distant tortured screams. Cold blue fires burn'.
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very nice debut

      

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4 posted 09-13-2009 10:52 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thanks everyone for your comments.

And Luke? How did you know I was spamming? :P
I thought I was undetectable. LOL. Gotta work on that I guess.

-Zach
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5 posted 09-13-2009 04:39 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Zach,

You have come such a long way since I first started reading your poetry.  I think that's when you first joined PiP.  Man, you have grown as a person and a poet.

I love this.

xoxoxo
Alison
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6 posted 09-15-2009 03:05 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Haha thanks Alison.
*phew* good thing I improved in the time I've been here at least. Hahaha.

-Zach  
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7 posted 10-27-2009 03:09 PM       View Profile for MorningStar   Email MorningStar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MorningStar

Really beautifully written.  & If it's not too mushy, I'd say - charming.  Thank you for sharing this piece.
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I just had
a 2 hour bath,
lit by candle light,
so yes, my friend, I do.

wonderful poem, rich with vision and feeling. Well done!
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9 posted 10-27-2009 08:05 PM       View Profile for naturegirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for naturegirl

Hi, I really liked your poem you described the way that time seems to stop when you see something beautiful, perfectly.

threadbear
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10 posted 10-28-2009 12:41 AM       View Profile for threadbear   Email threadbear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for threadbear

Well done alt-poetry, F.Rain!
even a teardrop
caught in a spiders web
has beauty
when caught in morning light.

t.bear
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Have you ever wished
To have an endless night
Cherish the moments a tad longer
Bathing in the pale moonlight

Oh, yes. *S*

Beautiful write, Zach... welcome to Open! *S*
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Very nice work. Keep on. You are really blossoming. latearrival
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13 posted 01-23-2010 12:53 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Thank you everyone!
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The simplicity of the pictures your words paint is awe-inspiring.
We often forget to stop and see the beauty in life. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

 
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