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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-09-10 04:59 PM




Tomorrow comes with moon light

Star light, sun light

Street lamps oh so bright

Today I'm just a fool

Tomorrow you'll take my hand

You'll smile

We'll dance

Our lips will meet

No social laws they all fall

As we defeat

The time that forever wins

Forever spills its sand

Tomorrow you'll take my hand

Today your just the star

I am the fan

Standing silently from afar

We can be like

Two butterflies

Playing in the sky

Compared to you I'm just a moth

Flying my way on through the night

Compared to you I'm just a sloth

Sleeping my way on through the day

I wish I knew the words to say

To take you away

To steal your heart

So in the sky we can play

If you give me a chance

I'll probably fail

But it'll be worth the smile

On your lips

Those sweet eyes

Looking toward me

My pathetic figure

Of course I'll linger

Of course I'll dance

Just like a jester

Tears behind a smile

If you don't mind

I'll just sit for a while

Today,

'cause Tomorrow

You'll be mine.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-09-10 07:57 PM


It could happen.
I know because it has happened to me.
Good imagery.

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
2 posted 2009-09-12 10:58 AM



enjoyed  


martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-09-12 11:56 AM


thanks you for writing this
I hope this comes true for you
as I pray it will
for me

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