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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2009-09-10 11:30 AM



Look there
do you see
a couple sitting silently
Look there
do you see
a couple conversing easily
Look there
do you see
a loner making us wait for his words


Bisous du Paris
RDB



Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2009-09-10 01:27 PM


ms r&b, can feel your smile as you wear it daily there..
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-09-10 03:40 PM


Your eyes behold life and enjoy it, dear Roniece.

Your gaze roams beautifully!

It's just what we would say if sitting there together, while sipping café ... "look ... do you see" and we would discover a world.

Bisous de Rome,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2009-09-10 05:22 PM


absorb every moment of Paris, RDB! ~ A lovely experience to have been through.

~Have you done many shopping trips? Do tell lol


ARCTIC WIND

Alison
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4 posted 2009-09-12 11:46 PM


Maybe he should eat them .. his words, I mean.

xoxoxo
Alison

Rick
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5 posted 2009-09-13 06:29 AM


Dear Roniece, your time in Paris does see you very relaxed my friend and we can feel the enjoyment through you words, thanks for sharing these moments, very much enjoyed.

Rick

jwesley
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6 posted 2009-09-13 08:55 AM


nice ... but actually he's nursing a hang-over...

j.

2islander2
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7 posted 2009-09-13 12:03 PM


hello Roniece, so fresh and thoughtful, your moments parisiens are delightful...

bonne journée

yann

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