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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-09-10 09:14 AM


Aware

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-10 02:08 PM


quote:
Enchanted throughout my senses
I was mesmerized with your deepest thoughts ...


You are most beautifully and deeply AWARE dear Bill, as your words so exquisitely show.

Love the picture too.

Love,
Margherita

jbstillwater
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2 posted 2009-09-10 02:18 PM


Excellent and well written poem, Bill.

Much enjoye
Jan

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-09-10 05:20 PM


Glorious writing dear Bill

This was really good, as per usual


ARCTIC WIND

vandana
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4 posted 2009-09-10 07:19 PM


liked it
LindsayP
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5 posted 2009-09-10 09:55 PM



Good one Bill.

Have a great day my friend.

Lindsay

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2009-09-10 11:25 PM


Don't you love it when all your senses come alive like that!!!

Gave me goose bumps, you did!!!

brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
7 posted 2009-09-12 11:01 AM



thanks for sharing your

journey of succulence and sighs

            


Ariana
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8 posted 2009-09-12 10:05 PM


Bill

Where were you with the tropical breeze?  It is wonderful to be "aware" of your senses and the air around you.

Ariana

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-09-13 12:20 PM


Excellent Bill, awareness of this and that, we should care more, thanks for the gracious poem...

yann

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2009-09-13 03:12 PM


Enjoyed, Bill.
           Ida

Alison
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11 posted 2009-09-13 04:13 PM


I am so glad that you share your awareness with us, Bill.  You write so beautifully and with so much emotion.

Alison

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
12 posted 2009-09-13 08:21 PM


Oh, what a little breeze can do!
Even Pablo would be entanced with this one
You do what you do so well
Liz

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