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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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0 posted 2009-09-10 01:39 AM



Don't listen

Are you crazy?

Don't listen

Are you insane?

Don't listen

I got nothin' to say

No experience to be learned

From this life of sin

Don't listen

They don't.

Why should you?

They won't.

You should too.

Ignore me.

Please?

Prove to me this life

Is as predictable as I perceive.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
GBride
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1 posted 2009-09-10 07:51 AM


A very interesting write.
Life is very predictable for the secular person, because each event occuring in their lives is instantly interperated in how it effects them personally.
Not by what is good for everyone, but what does it does for me. Each secular person is their own little God. If something goes wrong it must be someone elses fault.
I like your poem!!!

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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2 posted 2009-09-10 03:57 PM


Thank you for the response.
GBride
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3 posted 2009-09-10 08:04 PM


Why don't we run this poem back up to the top and see if we can get more comments.
I think your poem deserves it, don't you!

N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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4 posted 2009-09-12 03:19 AM


Looks like its just us
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