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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we wrinkled our moments into paper roses and exchanged them with the sunrise whispering the wafting of their scent across some mile of always wanting more you poured me a glass of your voice letting it run down the sides onto my mind then as I sipped from each brim of your sound your feet were nervous as with nothing else on like there was a place on my boot top toes where you could stand after we kissed and dance to the same songs as I did then letting your helpless stain my steal shirt and the armor of your woman silk threads would get snagged on a more lovely purpose nearly nuding you of your precautionary as you left me exposed to the sighways of you pressing our roses into fine white timeless ___________ daark (do of sand) sunado means way of sand |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Got this one at go .It is lovely. Love Esha |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
you poured me a glass of your voice letting it run down the sides onto my mind then as I sipped from each brim of your sound your feet were nervous as with nothing else on Perhaps one day when you are famous, I would enjoy standing on your boot tops so you could autograph my shirt...? L, H |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm glad I've eyes to enjoy your glasses... lovely words... always. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, I can't think of a more beautiful way to begin my day. It's like riding on a sigh as I ease into morning. Lovely. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Esha, thank you friend ________ Ms UBP oh let's pretend I am famous now (since I will never be) and wear that little tiny shirt with the rip in it? Thanks babe ___________ Ms sun, you always make we wish you were standing down at rincon watching the highway with me. Thanks lady ___________ Ms ali-san thank you for giving me your morning eyes. You bless me babe |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
pressing our roses into fine white timeless ___________ my fav  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms browneyes...will save you some then..thanks lady |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another one for the book, no doubt! Keep up the "thinking" yes?! Your "sighways" are enthralling ... Love, Margherita |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
her intonation resonating frequencies attuned to his soul. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi. The she of you is lovely in the dove day thoughts. Thanks babe _________ Ms mar thank you dear lady. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"you poured me a glass of your voice letting it run down the sides onto my mind" now this is a wonderful thought~~ M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thank you lady friend |
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