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anniepimm54
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0 posted 2009-09-08 07:15 AM



Ebony Eyes Of Pearl,

When it seems as though nobody really cares,
and the people you know just turn away.
Those you love should be there for you
and you are lost for so many words to say.

The comforting color of the embers glow,
it's golden light filling the room.
Lost for words as you stare at the flame,
It's essence! brightening the gloom.

Ebony eyes that shines like a pearl,
Looking deep into the dark cold night.
what wonders have those eyes seen,
As they shine so iridescently bright.

Mysteries the eyes portray and see,
the wonders in my soul so deep.
Never telling the stories that they learn,
until I fall fast asleep.

Annie
7-9-2009


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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-08 10:39 AM


quote:
Mysteries the eyes portray and see
the wonders in my soul so deep.



Love it and especially the lines I quoted above, dear Annie.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
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Ottawa Ontario
2 posted 2009-09-08 01:43 PM


i really like your writing.  it has a very soft flow to it.  reminds me of a very nice time in my life.

zaac

I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me.

anniepimm54
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3 posted 2009-09-08 04:31 PM


Awww Thank you Margherita and Zaac I am so glad you liked it...
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-09-08 07:24 PM


Enjoyed...James
anniepimm54
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5 posted 2009-09-08 07:41 PM


Thank you James
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