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Open Poetry #45

Seeing Double

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2009-09-07 03:36 PM

sam :

                   you have to admit she's showing a lot of hearts

al :

                  and what about the Captain of her Heart

                  he is too

sam :

                  so what do we do?

                  they're almost out of reasons to open that last bottle of Mountain Dew

                                     [agreeing]

                 i've never seen two people so happy to be Blue

                tell me something

                are the unhappy parts of this story true?

                did he try too hard to pursue her flirty heart?

sam :

                i'm afraid so

al :

                what a way to lose at Dirty Hearts

                okay, go ahead and set the time machine

                maybe we still have time to clue him in

                                 [Sam nodding]

                                                                                    love,

                                                                                    eve & howard

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-09-07 05:19 PM

hello howardtsu, such an original poem, I appreciated a lot, your dialogue is convincing...Thanks for the poem.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-09-08 06:25 AM

If only time machines did exist, hu?

You are too cute, dear Howard!

Love,
Margherita

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