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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-09-07 01:18 AM




© Copyright 2009 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-07 12:38 PM


And how beautifully you honor them in words and picture, dear Alison. Their last hours are sweeter because of you.

Love,
Margherita

brneyedgrly
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2 posted 2009-09-07 01:06 PM



I love your soldier leaves...

the font you chose works

very well with the color of

the leaves and what your are

saying about them...

enjoyed very much, girly

      


Artic Wind
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3 posted 2009-09-07 01:13 PM


Now this is one of my favorites of yours.

very beautiful, lovely and haunting in natures way.




ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2009-09-07 01:16 PM


Opsy, now it's saved lol


ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2009-09-07 01:25 PM


I often wonder how they endure this each year. You paint a vivid picture of it all
Oklahoma Rose
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6 posted 2009-09-07 02:08 PM


Very beautiful, Alison. Autumn is my favorite time of the year.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-09-07 02:41 PM


You do these so well! There are battles all around us in nature, but they go unnoticed by most people ~ but not our Lasky Girl photographer/poetess!


Linda

jbstillwater
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8 posted 2009-09-07 03:38 PM


gorgeous in every way

Jan

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-09-07 05:12 PM


so beautifully expressed alison, autumns are splendid in your country and they inspire you with art and delicacy...

thanks for the well expressed poetry.

yann

Suncleaver
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10 posted 2009-09-07 09:05 PM


Ooo... a Haiku!

And a beautifully metaphorical one too, Alison.

Love and hugs, Luke.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

LindsayP
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11 posted 2009-09-08 01:15 AM



Dear Alison I would like second Yann's

response in every way, it was spot on.
Take care, love.

Lindsay

Prasad Nataraj
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12 posted 2009-09-08 06:32 AM


Nice picture of the Autumn leaves and very expressive words to go with it.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

secondhanddreampoet
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13 posted 2009-09-10 08:06 PM


fine change of seasons 'write' !

excellent photo-imagery as well ...

MUCH (sustained) applause for this post !!

[I can 'relate' to the fate of "Freddy the leaf"]

Alison
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14 posted 2009-09-13 02:18 AM


Thank you all very much .. you are special to me, each of you.

I have to let you in on something that just cracked me up though.  I designed my girl friend's wedding invitation and started it after this haiku.  I used this leaf picture as the base of her invitation.  When I came here now I saw the title of this haiku and laughed.

Isn't that too funny for a wedding invitation picture?

I love you all,
xoxoxo
A

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