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Davepth
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since 2009-03-30
Posts 8
Venlo, Netherlands

0 posted 2009-09-06 07:27 AM


Helloooo

Been busy with a new thing since my old gf and me got together again...And well, to be honest, I'm bloody happy to have her back...as u can read!

Hope you enjoy...Reaction are always welcome =D

I Wonder, I Ponder And I Hope

There is something in the air tonight..
Be it near or far away
It is something I have yet to see
Through my cloudy skies of grey
I ponder hard, I ponder long
And wonder endlessly
As I try my best to contemplate
What could this something be?!

Perhaps it is the evening rain..
As it falls with gracious ease?
Or the whisper of the Northern wind..
As it sails on through the trees.
It could even be the fragrance
Of the roses newly sprung!
Or the sweet sound of the nightingale
When his song, it has been sung!

But yet I know it is none of these..
As Ive seen and heard them all,
This something, it is new to me,
As I beckon to its call.
It plays upon my heart and mind,
My spirit and my soul,
For the first time in my weary life,
I feel that I am whole!

With heart and mind in unison,
I look unto the night,
Then feel this something touch me so,
As it sets my heart to flight,
And now I know whats in the air,
Its what Ive been dreaming of,
I feel so blessed this very night,
For this something, it is love..

The new morning, also brings a soft fear,
The fear, that one day you will leave,
As you're too good to be true,
And my world will fall apart,
And I won't know what to do.
You really are my everything,
You mean the world to me!

As I see the sun rise
while the dew dries
I see how lucky I am
to get to look in your eyes
my day is brighter, with you in my heart
thanking the angels, for this wonderful new start!
And if you now smile and grant me a soft kiss,
Right after reading this, then my hopes were fulfilled..
as I recieved You, my love...You, my wish

© Copyright 2009 Davepth - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-09-07 12:29 PM



yes..it sounds like you are in love!


martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-09-07 12:49 PM


Ah... Far Away, So Close... Well done
Shadowdusk
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since 2009-09-07
Posts 7

3 posted 2009-09-07 06:51 AM


This is one of the most wonderful songs that describe love that I've read so far... truly amazing. Keep it up!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-09-07 12:52 PM


Love is in the air! And ever so sweet!

They say that love can be better the second time around! It sounds as though you and your girlfriend are off to a great start! Hopefully you can learn from your first time around and make this reunion better than you could have ever dared dream!

To love and romance!

EA

Davepth
New Member
since 2009-03-30
Posts 8
Venlo, Netherlands
5 posted 2009-09-07 02:11 PM


Thank you for the warming replys!

~Earth Angel; Yeah, we've indeed been off to a good start Let's hope we can keep it like this! haha =)

~Dave =D

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