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ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
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0 posted 2009-09-05 10:16 PM


ATRIBUTE TO YOU FRIEND


Thought I woke up with today
Why O why do I live in yesterday
And your tranquill face came before with a smile
Me thought how could I let foolishness steal my smile
When I had you holding my hand and teaching me to stride
Why O why did I let my traumatic yesterday stop my stride

I stopped in my tracks and stood thinking for long
Is this how I repay my friend for making me strong
When anger invades you take a deep breath says he
Close your eyes and think about me
You will find me smiling at you around the corner
Why O why do I always make less your honour

If friend I truely hold you dear
I will keep your faith and never fear
Rough maybe the path I tread through this life
But with you by my side should I stop and strife
With thoughts which hurt you more than me
Why O why do I drag you through sorrow with me

You taught me the meaning of smile
And silently withstood all my rantings
Never did you complain when I took away even your smile
Just remained within my vision all through my ravings
To love and cherish you I am honour bound
Why O why do I slurry the life time friendship I found.


[This message has been edited by ESHA SEN GUPTA (09-06-2009 04:54 AM).]

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ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
1 posted 2009-09-05 10:27 PM


Sorry friends i have made two typing mistakes one I wrote racks instead of tracks and the second I forgot to write find me smiling at you.please bear I will pay attention next time.

Love Esha


Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
2 posted 2009-09-05 11:04 PM


that's what friends are for. You are lucky to have found a good friend, who stands by you at times of hardships.Wonderful tribute to a worthy friend.Keep writing..

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
3 posted 2009-09-06 12:26 PM


Thank you Prasad keep up the encouragement and I will try to live up to your expectations.
Love Esha.


2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2009-09-06 04:16 AM


hello Esha, nice to read you, your poem is all what friends are made for, we have ups and downs and with friends we can manage it, thanks for the thoughtful poem.

yann

ps, you know you can correct the wrong words during a day (or two ?) you go to the icons above your poem and there is one for editing...

have  a nice day

yann

ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
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Maharashtra,India
5 posted 2009-09-06 04:55 AM


Thank you Yann it was very thoughtful of you to guide me.
Love Esha


poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
6 posted 2009-09-06 07:58 AM


A poem we all can relate to.

clever talks delay friendship!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
7 posted 2009-09-06 11:19 AM


Friends are to be treasured, indeed.
Loved your message here.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
8 posted 2009-09-06 12:57 PM


A good friend standing by our side can help us get through difficult times. Esha, I believe that one must be a good friend themself, and that in turn draws people to them that will be good friends. Like attracts like. Light attracts Light. Your friend, dear Esha, is a reflection of yourself.

May you learn and grow from your past lessons in life but may you release those painful experiences so that they do not impinge upon your today and your tomorrows.

A touching, emotionally expressive piece of writing.

Love & healing hugs,
Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2009-09-06 12:58 PM


Friends are those who help us through life's various challenges. Very well done and expressed. Loved the message.


ARCTIC WIND

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