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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria 
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SUPERMAN Our premier Jeff Kennet on a trip to the States Was invited to stay at a place quite elite, A convention of Superhero’s about to take place, Batman,Wonderwoman and the Phantom complete. Next morning for breakfast Superman arrived late And explained that he’d had a quite stressful night, Jeff Kennet inquired as to the cause of his state For he appeared as if suffering from quite a bad fright. Superman replied that as he was preparing for bed Wonderwoman was revealed with his x-ray vision, Lying naked on the bed and with him quite easily led, Then on an impulse he made this hasty decision. A quite startling result as I flew through the wall And then landed on the bed, as light as one can, “Wonderwoman would be shocked,” said Jeff quite appalled, Superman said, “not nearly as shocked as the invisible man. Lindsay |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Joyful, comical tale Lindsay. Smiling, smiling..all the way...  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lindsay my friend, I hadn't seen anything frmo you for weeks and was worried. I am so glad to see you were jsut saving up for a comical rendition to something I don't remember ever seeing in the comics. You wrote this very well, leaving the punch line for the very last word. LMAO Perfect. and funny as usual, Well done. Tracey |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
That's a new twist for the DC comics. ~ I don't think they have ever ventured down that path Good stuff,   ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, now, I always thought that it would be rather cool if I could be invisible at times. However, after reading the hysterical ending to your poem, I can now see that there could be some very real drawbacks to that! lol Love 'n hugs, dear Lindsay, Linda   |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, enjoyed your write my friend, leaving smiles as it goes. Have a great day Lindsay, chat soon. Rick |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My good friends Prasad, Tracey, Michael, Linda and Rick, thanks so much for your kind responses, they brighten my day. God bless you all and take care. Lindsay |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
this made me think of watching the justice league when I was little always wondered if they had crushes on each other lol my favorite of yours love, Shellie |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You make me laugh and that is a gift that you share. Thank you. Alison |
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ESHA SEN GUPTA Member
since 2009-09-01
Posts 108Maharashtra,India |
Thanks I really laughed after many days.Your poem is funny but powerful. Love Esha |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my dear sweet Lindsay!! This is hiliarious!! thanks for the laughter... Bisous du Paris xx RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Shellie, Alison, Esha and Roniece, you are all very kind with your comments and I love you all. It really brightens my day to receive such a kind response. thank you. Lindsay |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I always enjoy a good surprise at any ending...  Great work, Lindsay! Keep the smiles coming! So glad to see you! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lindsay, thank you for the smiles. Just read about invisibility in Michio Kaku's book "Physics of the impossible". It is not mere science fiction. Invisibility qualifies as a Class I Impossibility, which means that within the next few decades or at least within this century, a form of invisibility may become commonplace. Can you imagine what will happen?? Love and smiles. Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Sunshine, I'm so glad that you had a smile from my poem and I thank you for popping in a nice response. Love, Lindsay Margherita, It's always so good to see your comments and I'm glad that you had a laugh as well, Think of the fun we could have if being invisable did evenuate. Thank you dear friend, Love, Lindsay |
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