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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2009-09-03 07:51 AM


Fall is already showing its presence,
much earlier this year.
The squirrels and chipmunks
have been very busy harvesting.
No robins in sight for over a month,
they left a long time ago
seeking more suitable habitat.
Summer barely arrived a month ago
yet appears to be departing.

September is still quite wonderful.
The moon was high in the sky last night
in all its splendid glory
peeking down upon the garden,
seeming to listen
to the crickets serenade.
The wet cool summer meant few mosquitos,
so no dragonflies hovered about the yard.

A handful of resident toads hide by day
amongst the rocks and stones
strategically placed
to keep plant roots warm
as the stones release
whatever daytime warmth
they gathered in storage.

I love Autumn color changes,
and hope to see leaves changing
to brilliant golds, oranges and reds
before my journey West in early October.
But Mother Nature will do as she must,
not abide by my calendar wishes.

Meanwhile, the sky is gorgeous on clear nights
and it seems the moon reaches down
to embrace me under the September night-skies.
All is as it should be....

© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-09-03 08:10 AM


"All is as it should be" ...

In Nature's embrace you surrender so beautifully to what is, dearest Kacy.

You create such wonderful, tangible harmony, like in deep meditation. Your awareness flows from the page into the heart of this reader.

It will be hard to leave your garden, but you will grow memories of beauty within your heart garden.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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2 posted 2009-09-03 08:31 AM


Margherita, your replies are always so right-on, and heart warming! Thank you so much for reading me so well.
latearrival
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3 posted 2009-09-03 11:38 AM


Kacy this is a lovely piece. I especially love the toads hiding by day. Last night when I put out the bin of recyclables I heard a tiny kittenish purring sound.  A little guttural sound. The toads? Or little frogs? I hear so many sounds I have not yet been able to interpret,or decipher. I know there are so many strange and different sounds coming from frogs. A tiny quack of a duck is one; the moo of a cow is another. This one I have not figured out as yet. I hear sounds at night that sound like cats in distress and wonder.I think it is another frog sound? best to you Kacy, keep writing and letting  us know your where abouts. jo
Prasad Nataraj
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4 posted 2009-09-03 12:19 PM


Nature at it's best presentation. Beautiful pictures painted on my mind, the moon is here and he's peeping through my window...Toads and crickets are on the night orchestra. Simply beautiful..

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2009-09-03 12:26 PM


lovely words Midnitesun.....

~ARH

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6 posted 2009-09-03 12:29 PM


Kacy, you have painted Mother Nature in all her glory at this time of year. I found myself immersed in the sights and sounds of September. A very pleasurable reading experience!

"All is as it should be." ~ Yes, indeed!


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7 posted 2009-09-03 05:12 PM


Absolutely correct, Kacy! ~ You know, your poem just caught my attention on the first line. You have a beautiful gift. Please keep using it midnitesun! Beautiful, Beautiful, and Beautiful.


ARCTIC WIND

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8 posted 2009-09-03 06:59 PM


I love the season of Autumn. It is my favorite time of year.
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9 posted 2009-09-03 07:59 PM


THANKING EACH OF YOU!
I love Autumn colors. Maybe it's because I was born mid-November? I remember even in Southern California where I grew up we had a few fall color changes, but nothing like the northeast often gets, though last year Autumn was somewhat drab.

I will be relocating to the Oregon coast the first week of October, so will see some fall colors in the local forests. But it will be lots of salty air, driftwood and blowing sands for me.
I love it!
My daughter will be stationed with a Coast Guard unit at Tillamook/Garibaldi Station after she graduates basic training the end of September.
Garibaldi and Tillamook are barely 15-30 minutes drive to my beloved Rockaway Beach, my Oregon 'Nessie'!
Maybe it's time to repost last July's Nessie poem.

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10 posted 2009-09-05 06:28 PM


Kacy, I love this to bits, especially the parts about the critters.  You know what would be a REAL luxury?  Reading a whole THICK book of these garden/nature ones - in sort of a diary form.  

Owl

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11 posted 2009-09-05 06:35 PM


Oops!  Power on my computer shut down while replying to your Nessie poem, and landed putting it in here by mistake - will go back to the right place and put it in there.  Couldn't delete this, not being a moderator.!  Smiles.

Owl

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12 posted 2009-09-05 07:24 PM


LOL, thanks Di for reading both of these recent posts.
Hope the computer is ok?

Margherita
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13 posted 2009-10-08 06:03 AM


quote:
Meanwhile, the sky is gorgeous on clear nights
and it seems the moon reaches down
to embrace me under the September night-skies.
All is as it should be....


Again I enjoyed this very much. I am sure you are enjoying your new home in Oregon by now and I am also sure that there too ... ALL IS AS IT SHOULD BE!

So soothing.

Love and hugs,
Margherita

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14 posted 2009-10-08 01:18 PM


hello Kacy, such a delightful painting of seasons, a magical song of autumn, thanks for the poem.

yann

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15 posted 2009-10-12 09:53 PM




(huggies) Oh Kacy, this is a most beautiful, attentive reflection on Mother Nature's slow but sure change in wardrobe, my friend! (smiles)

Is it just me, by the way, or is it taking the leaves on the trees to change color almost an entire month longer compared to last year? Because I remember around my birthday last year that most trees already had leaves go brown and blanket the soils, yet only a small handful of trees have changed color so far this season!

This is gorgeous, my friend, here's a stein of E-fresh-squeezed apple cider for you, on the house, yay! (passes stein onto you)

XOXO,
Lisping Hibiscus

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Klassy Lassy
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16 posted 2009-10-12 11:06 PM


Ah, September with the last embers of summer to set fire to fall and warm wishes. A cup of hot for you now to taunt the haunt of October....

I want summer to hold out a little longer, too.  You pen the wist beautifully.

Karen

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17 posted 2009-10-13 08:48 PM


I really enjoyed all of the images aand sights in your poem. You seem to be very familiar with all the signs of the changes of the seasons in your area. Many people miss these little milestones. I especially enjoyed the description of the toads as being 'resident toads'.
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18 posted 2009-10-13 08:49 PM


I'd like the warm days to stick around a bit too, but am enjoying the crispness in the air and the sudden color changes beginning to appear.
Thanks for the warm drinks! It was chilly and rainy here this morning, but that didn't keep me indoors. Just had to put a sturdy hooded windbreaker on and go down to the docks and watch the sky change.
I'm not going for the sunset walk tonight though, as I twisted my hip/lower back moving a box and now I look like some ol lady hobbling down the street! (I'm not old yet in my mind LOL)

drgngrl, I just moved from PA to OR three weeks ago, so the new imagery will vary a bit.

OwlSA
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19 posted 2009-10-14 12:12 PM


What an absolute delight it was to read your last response - right up to, but NOT including the part where you twisted your hip.  

I am thrilled that you are doing so well.  

Perhaps it would be a good idea to check out the hip, especially if it hasn't got decidedly better since you twisted it - yes, I know - the expense, but it will be more expensive if it persists.  Either way, I am glad you are treating it gently.  

By the way, I enjoyed the walk down to the docks with you immensely (hope you didn't mind me going along too), but wow, it was a lot more chilly for me than it was for you, being from sunny South Africa!  May I join you on the next one too, please?

Owl

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20 posted 2009-10-14 02:32 PM


Hi Di!
The hip is fine, it was just a minor tweaking.
Earlier we had gale force winds and driving rain. It has settled a bit. I might venture out, warm windbreaker with hood and gloves on. Even short walks are invigorating. I've never been one to hibernate, no matter the weather, but am more cautious now when powerful winds are blowing. Trees and other things often become airborne missiles, LOL, and I'm not so fast at dodging them these days.

How are things in Durbin?
I will email you later today.

OwlSA
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21 posted 2009-10-15 06:31 PM


I'm glad the hip is getting better.  If it doesn't get completely better in a reasonable amount of time, I hope you will have it checked out.  Shoof!  Is the wind THAT bad there?  We don't have anything like that here.  I am glad you are cautious about it, then.

Owl

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