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Open Poetry #45

I'm still CRYING

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

0 posted 2009-09-01 11:34 PM

Why did you have to go?
I'll never understand.
You had to leave a hole
in everyone you touched.

More people loved you
than you thought.
You could've reached out.
we were here for you, we thought.

Did you ask yourself
"what would my friends do
if I was gone?"
Well now you know.

No one saw it coming.
we're still crying
still in disbelief.
losing you will always ache.

ESHA SEN GUPTA
Member

since 2009-09-01

Posts 108
Maharashtra,India

1 posted 2009-09-02 08:53 AM

Simple words describing the worst kind of pain.

loved it.
Esha

Emi<3Naruto =]
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since 2009-09-05

Posts 32

2 posted 2009-09-05 10:02 PM

wow...very powerful and affecting. great poem em

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-09-06 11:52 AM

CC ~ is this heart-wrenching poem on the passing of your beloved dog?
I feel your pain. You expressed in very convincingly.

Giving you a warm, healing, compassionate hug,

EA

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

4 posted 2009-09-06 05:37 PM

Thanks. This isn't about my dog though, it's about my friend who committed suicide... I bet it makes more sense now? Read it again and it might.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-09-06 07:49 PM

Oh, Rileigh, how tragic to lose your friend ~ and in such a way. Please forgive my mistaken interpretation of your poem. You recently did lose your dog, as well, did you not?

May your tears wash away your pain.

Giving you a warm, healing hug,

Love & Eternal Light,

Linda

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2009-09-06 08:04 PM

This is so sad and tender. Sending healing hugs.

ARCTIC WIND

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

7 posted 2009-09-06 10:18 PM

Thank you both. Yep, you are right I did lose my puppy too. No worries about the interpretation. That's what so amazing about poetry. Different people interpret it different ways.

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