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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2009-09-01 10:25 PM



It knocks with its chill
familiar chartrueses
return to refurbish
the ink of the tired
ones

it emcompasses
drifters along with
the prophets and posers

all lean to the left

the matriach winces
soon to repose
knowing the next moon
brings forth that
which is destined
that which is cyclical

the southerly winds
grant liberation

a pass
to her offspring

while windows
are capturing

you, me
the leaf

all locked
in limbo



[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (09-03-2009 08:43 AM).]

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ESHA SEN GUPTA
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1 posted 2009-09-02 03:16 AM


very beautifully expreesed


Margherita
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2 posted 2009-09-02 01:55 PM


Intriguing write, dear Michele!

Love,
M

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-09-02 02:17 PM


ms inky...your limbo is limber lovely..
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2009-09-04 10:04 PM


it emcompasses
drifters along with
the prophets and posers

all lean to the left

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Dang woman!!  Love your writing, and how you throw in just enough attitude!!  


Artic Wind
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5 posted 2009-09-05 12:16 PM


Beautiful write, dearest Inked! ~ and also a wonderful new picture you have up there.


ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2009-09-05 12:20 PM


inkedgoddess - only as you can write, another great one. By the way, I have to ask if you can change your new photo, as everytime I try to read your poetry I can't concentrate, h'aaaa, just kidding, it's beautiful...

BC

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7 posted 2009-09-07 02:24 AM


I have read this several times and just get caught up in the words and flow.  It's wonderful.

Alison

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2009-09-07 07:59 AM


thanks for stopping by and doing the september song with me
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2009-09-07 02:44 PM


Goddess, I agree with the Bluesy One and her comment about you throwing in just enough attitude! Actually, I agree with all the comments posted before mine!


Linda

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