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jjbreunig3
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since 2009-07-29
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Maine, USA

0 posted 2009-09-01 01:54 PM



Cool flowing waters
cater me with plenty of…
Aquatic playmates.

Smallmouth and largemouth –
Either kind acceptable,
if they are landed.

Get them in the boat!
Fishing stories without proof
are just plain-faced lies.

Imitating bugs?
Fishing is an art form of…
Posing as insects.

The splashing fishes
are vying for attention
during school’s recess.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-09-01 04:29 PM


Those were great! As one who loves to fish, I enjoyed and appreciated each one of them! I literally broke into chuckles over a couple of them!

Happy fishing!


EA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-09-02 06:30 AM


Loves this and particularly:

quote:
Cool flowing waters
cater me with plenty of…
Aquatic playmates.



A dangerous play for them though! when your goal is to make them land in the boat!

Love,
M

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