»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #45
»
September
| Open Poetry #45 |
|
September |
|
|
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
|
. The sun rises Over a blue sea Rhythmically rolling Onto the shore The trees sway In a passing breeze Leaves rustle As the day’s first birds Take to the air There are White clouds Like great ships Sailing East Across the sky I drink you in With the morning light You look at me And smile . |
||
| © Copyright 2009 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
LOVE this and LOVE September! This is a rare upbeat poem from you, i like it! |
||
|
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you However I must take issue with: “This is a rare upbeat poem from you” …………….. “A man of any feeling must feed his imagination; there must be a woman of whom he can dream.” Thomas Wentworth Higginson That’s very hard to do in a vacuum . . . It’s a miracle I can write at all. Thanks again. John . |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Love it. M |
||
|
jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
And I am drinking this poem in...much enjoyed Jan |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
