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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-09-01 09:07 AM


Fleeting is the fortunate, fanciful fame
Wake not where from wistful, wondrous dreams
Pursued perchance by perfectly popular shame
Transcended most torturous tasks and themes
Now some nine and twenty nights of your name

To scale the serpentine paths of scandalous signs
And move the mountains of monsters and men
That deities deem disposable pawns by design
To therefore rise in totality against them
Singing songs of symbolic surrendering time

Behold the beginnings of bright and beautiful fame
For in those feelings first, and foremost
Lies a love of life that lays no blame
And a chanting chorus you come to compose
A song for heroic hearts to heal half the shame



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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2009-09-01 08:34 PM


this is extraordinary.

fantastic!!!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-09-01 08:50 PM


"Behold the beginnings of bright and beautiful fame
For in those feelings first, and foremost
Lies a love of life that lays no blame
And a chanting chorus you come to compose
A song for heroic hearts to heal half the shame"

Your handling the stories of the Athenian leader is very interesting Jer. Pericles was a grat orator, populist, and an important figure in the arts as well.

All that alliteration, WOW! Unbelievable!

You never cease to amaze me how many subjects you adeptly write about.

Into my library with several others.

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
3 posted 2009-09-02 01:30 AM


You never cease to amaze me.

Your talent is stellar.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

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