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zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
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0 posted 2009-08-31 12:10 PM



Lyin’ here in magic;
two shadows dancing on the walls.
No one here to listen,
to hear the rise and fall.

Move with me in velvet
into the afterglow.
No one’s gonna’ find us,
no one has to know.

Lay with me.
Won’t you just stay with me?
Until the night
is running from the east.
Hold me close;
promise you won’t let go.
It’ll be alright…
It’s alright …
with me.

Touch me like the ocean;
like waves at eventide.
I’ll kiss you like the sunset
reaching for the sky.

Let them moment smolder;
like embers between our hearts.
Come with me to Eden,
It’s never very far.

Lay with me.
Won’t you just stay with me?
Until the night
is running from the east.
Hold me close;
promise you won’t let go
It’ll be alright…
It’s alright…
with me.


Pulses racing in the silence;
we don’t have to say a word.
Oh, the heat and flames’ still rising,
so let the fire burn.

Lay with me.
Won’t you just stay with me?
Until the night
Is running from the east.
Hold me close;
I promiseI won’t let go.
It’ll be alright…
Yeah, it’s alright…
with me.
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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2009-08-31 12:18 PM


~A Beautiful Love Song~

~ARH

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with you
2 posted 2009-08-31 09:09 AM


"Touch me like the ocean;
like waves at eventide.
I’ll kiss you like the sunset
reaching for the sky."

very much enjoyed this!

kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
Posts 156

3 posted 2009-08-31 02:34 PM


Favorite line: "Come with me to Eden,
It’s never very far."

This flowed quite well, and the beauty of this is that it's simutaneously a word picture and an invitation. Absolutely loved it, and look forward to reading more of your work.


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2009-09-01 04:54 PM


My dear fellow Canadian, what a loverly love song!!! I was hard-pressed to choose my favourite lines ~ of my favourite lines! lol

"Touch me like the ocean;
like waves at eventide.
I’ll kiss you like the sunset
reaching for the sky."  ~ Sigggggghhhhhh


Earth Angel

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