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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2009-08-30 12:07 PM


Sometimes
a proof read
is not needed for poetry,
just pure adoration
for the simplicity
beauty
for length
rhythm
for every
single
word
is all that needs to be expressed.

K...Just to let everyone I read and haven't read yet know, this is just an expression of my appreciation for everything I reply to. My replys are simple and that worried me, but then I realized...sometimes fewer words are needed to express awe.

© Copyright 2009 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-08-30 03:20 PM


Temptress - simple words always tell a story, as the ones in this write. Lovely...

BC

Paul Wilson
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711
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2 posted 2009-08-30 04:23 PM


Temptress...You are so right. Sometime less is better. I always just try and show my appreciation to the poet for sharing their work with me. Some poems talk to me and mirror a part of my life, so I let them know...Paul

BTW I didn't know you were from Ocean Springs. I live close by in Lumberton only about an hour North.

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
3 posted 2009-08-30 09:09 PM


Any visit from you, however short and simple, would be most welcome.

Most people don't want a critic anyway. They want a kindred spirit to share a feeling with.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

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