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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-08-29 10:11 PM



For Millions of Years

From day one I
liked her personality.
She was and still is
a fulfillment of
all my fantasy's.
Her beautiful smile
washes away my tears,
the sweetness of her lips
disappates my fears.
If I could spend
my life with her
I'd love her
for millions
of years.

JamesLee
28August
2009



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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
1 posted 2009-08-29 10:49 PM


love is a wonderful emotion and beautifully expressed here James...Hope she's reading your poem too.:-)

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-08-29 10:52 PM


Reminds me of the song,
"I will love you longer than forever"
(boy I'm dating myself now)  

Sweet stuff, James~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2009-08-30 03:52 AM


beautifully expressed. thanks for the poem.

yann

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2009-08-30 03:23 PM


Much enjoyed.

Rick

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-09-01 05:15 PM


"If I could spend
my life with her
I'd love her
for millions
of years."

~ Likewise, I'm sure, Romantic Hawaii Man!!!


Linda

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2009-09-02 01:57 PM


A lovely way to say "forever", dear James!

Love,
M

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