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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-08-29 12:53 PM



Kickin around
the ends of summer
the dawns of autumn

crazy loons
we splash in
poorman's puddles

my feet flippin
over your appleorchards

and then i fall

into the hills
of suggestion

out west, with
the cloud covers
beconing my inhibitions

only for you
would I follow

sightless, without
struggle

or aid
of a star studded umbrella.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-08-29 02:25 PM


Look at you, so pretty in pink.
Yep, that star studded umbrella suits you!

Beautiful write, as always!!

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
2 posted 2009-08-29 06:18 PM


This is a beautiful poem. And, I like your new picture.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2009-08-29 06:27 PM


quote:
crazy loons
we splash in
poorman's puddles



Always a treat to read your extravagant thoughts.

Love the new picture too, such a charming sight!

Love,
Margherita

Kaoru
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Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2009-08-31 01:31 PM


"my feet flippin
over your apple orchards"

I really like this..
and your new picture.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2009-08-31 02:39 PM


ms inki...if you were out here
I would introduce your sighs to the clouds..enjoyed you as usual babe

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
6 posted 2009-08-31 02:49 PM


You never fail to satisfy...poetry that is inked. lol

Starry and dreamy all at once.

vandana
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USA
7 posted 2009-08-31 05:50 PM


nice read
SEA
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with you
8 posted 2009-08-31 05:57 PM


I absolutely love reading you.

this is a favorite from you...I'm keeping it.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2009-08-31 08:48 PM


thank you so much for stopping by and kickin it up with me
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2009-08-31 10:42 PM


inkedgoddess - my goodness, what a most becoming photo of you. Love your words in this writing...

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
11 posted 2009-09-01 05:07 PM


MicheleRose, you are a Goddess of the Sea, as well! ~ and you look fantabulous in your new pic!


Linda

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
12 posted 2009-09-03 05:47 PM


I really enjoyed this Inked! ~ Beautiful.


ARCTIC WIND

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
13 posted 2009-09-03 06:48 PM


"Kickin around
the ends of summer"  love those first 2 lines, especially.

Summer went by too fast for me.

That is a beautiful picture, Michele. I had to reply first before the new one would show up
M



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