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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2009-08-28 05:46 AM


The candle has gone out,
My dream's deceived by fate,
I'm standing at the bound
Of 'then' and 'now',
But it's too late
To turn back,
Walking on the edge of razorblade.
Eternity is close,
It knows no time,
But through each silent night
I hear your voice
Implore "Don't die..."

The moonlight brings the charm
To tears in my eyes
Each time I come to wait for you
Beneath my fallen skies.
You're safe here in my arms,
My lips explore your skin
That's soaked in the air
Of my love that we breathe in.
But then the morning comes -
I wish I'd never wake.
I'll reach you now,
My far-off star,
Whatever it takes.

Appease my each heartfret
And close my swollen eyes
Don't let me see my sky ruined again,
Just not tonight.
I'm water, you're fire,
And we're one silent force.
We dream and know that conspires
The universe
To make it happen, and we are
The universe.


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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2009-08-28 04:45 PM


enjoyed a lot the emotion of the poem, words of love are irristible...Thanks for the touching poem.

yann

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Gaia
2 posted 2009-08-28 10:11 PM


A fine emotional romantic display.
Suncleaver
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Stafford England
3 posted 2009-08-29 02:17 AM


Beautifully expressive romanticism.

And all the roads that I've been strolling down... now I've found they all seem to be marooned. So profoundly doomed.

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