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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2009-08-27 04:14 PM


It's a good thing
van Gogh doesn't need
my sunflower garden
for his vibrant paintings.
Yet my five sunflowers
are enough for a small canvas
should someone decide
to capture them
in brilliant yellow gold.

Two Sun-heads are drooping now,
almost as much as my head
droops on Chemo Tuesdays.
The scarcity of wildflowers
made the few all the more precious,
and rowdy Blackeyed Susans
nearly took over one flower bed,
while the Echinacea over powered
smaller flowers in another planting.

Nature took the upper hand all summer,
with lots of rain, little sun,
yet with an even-handed dose
of whatever was needed
to transform the yard
into a vibrant color palette
all the passersby enjoyed.

A tiny racing-striped chipmunk
stayed busy stealing small green tomatoes
then feasting on them on the porch steps.
Most of the tomato crop encountered
tomato blight, but there were enough
for me to enjoy the fresh home grown taste
of those succulent juicy fiery red orbs.

I'm winding down from gardening now,
no more plantings to nurture.
The perennials will return on their own
next year, and the cycle of life
will again renew itself.
That's Nature's Way,
the way of the Universe.




© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-08-27 04:23 PM


Dear Kacy, thank you for the treat to visit your garden and enjoy your deep thoughts. This is poignantly beautiful and colorful with the light gentle touch of melancholy.

It's a keeper.

Love and hugs.
Margherita


Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-08-27 04:34 PM


I don't know much of those flower names lol, but I can see it all so clearly.

And then the nature poem ends on a poignant, powerful note. Loved it.

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3 posted 2009-08-27 04:36 PM


Kacy, even in the world of flowers, there is competition ~ and survival of the fittest ~ and showiest! Delicate violets can wilt in the shade of a sunflower or peony!

You are one of my all-time favourite poets. ~ and I mean ALL-TIME. ~ even when compared to the classic writers of by-gone eras. Your poetry is timeless.

Here I go again!   SAVED!!!

Be well, dear poetess.

Warm, healing hug,

Linda



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4 posted 2009-08-27 04:39 PM


Margherita, thank you for your lovely kind reply! I'd send you a bouquet if I could!

Jer, LOL, those flowers practically shout their names at the sun! THANK YOU, for being here. It's been a long, long week.

WOW, EA, that is quite a complement! Here is a since I have no bouquet to send you!

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5 posted 2009-08-27 04:48 PM


Dear Kacy, a from you sweetens my day as does an early morning rose. Thank you.

What I said, in my previous reply was said with utmost sincerity.


Linda

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6 posted 2009-08-27 05:08 PM


Fine summer garden impressionism!
[complete with a Van Gogh reference!]

MUCH applause for this 'penning' !!

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2009-08-27 06:03 PM


Midnitesun - I love this write about your garden. Loved the story and can't say enough about it...

BC

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8 posted 2009-08-27 07:47 PM


Bruce, thank you!
Impressionistic, eh?

Bill, thank you for that reply! It means a lot to me.

Linda, now you have me blushing.
Thank you....

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9 posted 2009-08-27 09:53 PM


Beautiful poem, so very descriptive about your garden, paints a wonderful picture in my mind. I am a great fan of Van Gogh too..

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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10 posted 2009-08-27 11:29 PM


Thank you, Kacy for the visit to your garden. I bet your garden is the best there is. I love tomatoes.

P.S. I hope you are feeling better.

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11 posted 2009-08-28 12:41 PM


Prasad what a nice surprise to see you here! Thanks for your thoughtful reply.

Sue, same to you, hope the visit to my garden provided a healing moment.
Wish I could send you a fresh tomato.

  

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12 posted 2009-08-28 02:15 AM


Kacy,

I, too, love your poetry.  You capture nature in a way that I see it and feel it.  You bring art to my eyes through your words.

Yet, I almost cried.  While I enjoyed your garden - I have been thinking of you so much lately

quote:
Two Sun-heads are drooping now,
almost as much as my head
droops on Chemo Tuesdays.


That says so much to me.  You are so positive and strong - I wish I could give you the hugs that I send mentally so often.

Love,
Alison

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13 posted 2009-08-28 02:30 AM


When I see the word sunflower I know ole Van Gogh would not be far behind.  You, like he did, painted a fabulous picture for all to enjoy of "your" garden.  Happy Fall Kacy, and kick butt on those Chemo Tuesdays kiddo!  Carpe' Diem.
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14 posted 2009-08-28 07:58 AM


Oh Alison, Tuesdays aren't the greatest but the tumor continues to shrink, so its worth the misery.
Thank you for your comments on the nature writes, they are probably my favorites.

Sharon, LOL, I try to kick butt (and not my own) as often as possible, sometimes I do get kicked though. Still, things are looking up for me at this point.
THANKS for the great photos you sent this morning, they gave me a huge healing laugh.  

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15 posted 2009-08-28 12:18 PM


Kacy, this is an absolute flower garden of a poem and my favourite (I think – there are so many that fit the bill) except for a couple of horsy poems of yours.  Your Vincent and his fans are the poorer for his not having seen your garden.  With regard to the end of the first stanza, YOU captured them in brilliant yellow gold.  Those two sunheads droop in empathy with your Tuesdays.  

Your poem is just as beautiful as the photograph of your garden.  I absolutely adore your little “racing-striped chipmunk” (please give him my love when you see him next).  I am sorry about the tomato blight, but glad you had some of them.  Kacy, you are the flower garden you paint, with your goodness and the inspiration you give to us all and your bright and beautiful spirit.

Love, prayers and huggles
Owl

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16 posted 2009-08-28 12:30 PM


OWL! Thank you dear, for that reply.
We barely got true summer weather here four weeks ago and now it's reverting back to chilly nights and cool days. It rained again today, and is supposed to thunderstorm this weekend. ~SIGH~ the sunflowers search for el Sol each day, but hang their heads in disappointment at the dreary skies.
I will have two more sessions of Chemo, and more testing, then will have a long break during the move back west (early October).

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17 posted 2009-08-28 12:37 PM


Poetic energy of imagery of your reflections dance on the mind of a delightful poem that was  enjoyed.
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18 posted 2009-08-28 01:55 PM


DL, thank you for reading and offering this reply!
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19 posted 2009-08-28 02:23 PM


this is how poetry should be.......wow
this is real

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20 posted 2009-08-28 06:01 PM


Thank you! BTW, I love your name...
it positively shines!

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21 posted 2009-09-01 01:07 PM


Kacy, the sky is crying and the sunflowers are sad that you are leaving for the West Coast.  I hope you will have lots of sunny days yet (even if it is a bit late) with them before you leave.  

Today is Tuesday, so a chemo day, so I am feeling for you.  Presumably you won't see this for a couple of days, though.

Love and huggles
Owl

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22 posted 2009-09-01 08:55 PM


Oh Diana, it was indeed a very long chemo session, and the side effects are kicking in already. Still, I will be online as I can, for all the positive energy I receive from reading at Pips.
Thanks for reading and replying.
My sunflowers and I are smiling.

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23 posted 2009-09-02 06:28 PM



The perennials will return on their own
next year, and the cycle of life
will again renew itself.
That's Nature's Way,
the way of the Universe.
______________

be well  


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24 posted 2009-09-03 01:56 AM


Loved the peek at your garden, Kacy. You are a truly fine poet. I love gardening too and this summer my tomatoes and peppers did really well. I am so glad to hear the your chemo is going well and that you are feeling encouraged. Always thinking of you.
                                    Ida
                                

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25 posted 2009-09-03 02:34 AM


Shellie, thank you so much for the visit!
Ida, that's a great salsa or salad combo, tomoatoe and pepper...yum! I didn't geta single bell pepper to grow, it was too rainy this summer, and well...those red orbs mostly are still lying around on the ground 'till I get the energy to rake them up. The critters are still enjoying them anyway. Little Chippie Chipmunk loves the small green cherry tomatoes growing by the front porch, eats them on the steps and leaves the drying outer skins all over the place. LOL. He scolds me for interrupting him when I open the screen door.

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