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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2009-08-27 08:51 AM



Passion's Flames

A touch soft and tender
A whisper filled with desire
A gasp of sweet surrender
As passion fuels the fire

No words spoken between them
No promises to be kept
No lies being told tonight
No looking back, no regret

Longing to hold each other
Such precious little time
Both vowed to another
Being lonely their only crime

Tomorrow bringing sadness
A brief moment of shame
The memory of this one night
A release from passion's flames

- Jeffrey Carter

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-08-27 01:50 PM


Jeffrey - written with much emotion, I feel it when I read your words. Nice write...

BC

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-08-27 04:46 PM


Yes, dear Jeffrey, this is a great write. Passionate, yet also delicate and very meaningful.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-08-28 04:43 PM


quite moving and full of passion...thanks for the poem.

yann

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2009-08-28 07:00 PM


"Both vowed to another
Being lonely their only crime"...

can relate Jeffrey, although sometimes it can lead to  other "crimes"


Nicely done~~

M

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