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Bigfoot, John Hurt, and the bloke from Frasier
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Bigfoot, John Hurt, and the bloke from Frasier |
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scorchedpen New Member
since 2009-08-26
Posts 5Norfolk, England |
They sat there, a triplet of comedy and interogation. Surrounding me with knowledge they probed the pillar, each finding their own answers and questions, some talking over others in gasps and weezing repertoire. Jolly, serious, and concerned swapped places in a ill sounding symphony its final note a message of confusion and faint hope, With scrutiny's tide out I sharpened my words and gently sent them forth with intended purpose, Invisible strings silently puppeteer ed eroded faces and twitching eyes flickered between fellow conspirators, With a politicions grace and a dancers footwork, sweetly scented words born on the back of rose petals seduced my ears, Suddenly time announced its divine presence and all disguises and shows transformed into grey slate uniformity, As my technical soul presumed to dress itself, firm handshakes walked me to the door, silently I laughed and bid farewell to Bigfoot, John Hurt, and the old bloke from Fraiser. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! I enjoyed your first entry, sounds like a funny gathering. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
welcome to the blue I really enjoyed this anecdotal glimpse of such an eclectic group...of life itself "each finding their own answers and questions, some talking over others in gasps and weezing repertoire" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! As a fan of all, I smiled at the enjoyment you explored in outlining the characters. The scene bloomed before my eyes.  Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm bumping this up again (because I can)  and it's a smile write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I would have gotten quite a chuckle out of witnessing this interesting gathering of minds and characters!  Welcome, scorchedpen! Love your wry sense of humour as evidenced in your clever poem and username! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug ~ and "hand-shake",  Earth Angel  |
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