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Margherita
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0 posted 2009-08-25 04:40 PM



    
* * *


When we fly together


* * *


You move through my veins
like the ache of pan flutes
when they echo both
the beauty and the sorrow
of being in this world
and of being in it with you.

You settle within my mind’s eyes
with the poignancy of a mauve sunset
waving good bye with rays of gold
and with a promise of smiles
within many more tomorrows
created into being by our souls.

You are the laughter of stars
which reflect within our eyes of lovers
and tease the thin slice of moon
that allows them brighter sparks
to cause deep sighs within our hearts
and nerve storms upon our fingertips.

You are the ethereal footprints
upon the highest crests of waves
of the all knowing endless ocean
where the unique song of our story
is recorded by the touch of winds
and played just for us forever and ever.

You are life’s most exciting manifestation
and nothing compares to the pleasure
of those moments when we spread our wings
to fly in untold heights together
in impalpable butterfly lightness
through pure elemental love space.

* * *

[This message has been edited by Margherita (08-26-2009 03:02 AM).]

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Oklahoma Rose
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1 posted 2009-08-25 09:47 PM


Another beautiful write from you, Margherita. Absolutel beautiful!
Alison
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2 posted 2009-08-25 10:10 PM


And you create a sigh within me as I read the beauty of your poetry.
quote:
You are the laughter of stars
which reflect within our eyes of lovers
and tease the thin slice of moon
that allows them brighter sparks
to cause deep sighs within our hearts
and nerve storms upon our fingertips.


Love,
Alison

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-08-25 10:13 PM


Dolphina ~ The Queen of Cosmic Love, your dazzling poem is electrifying! You are in a class all of your own!

Love your poetry! Love your spirit!




Angelo Terrestre

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-08-26 03:06 AM


Thank you, dear Sue, for saving this from oblivion and for telling me you liked it.

Thank you, sweet Alison, for sighing along with me ...

Angelo Terrestre, Linda of Knights, I know you fly in the same heights and that's why I believe you when you say you love my poems. Thank you from my heart. I love yours too!

Have a wonderful day all!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-08-26 07:18 AM


ms mar...you dress so lovely in your gown of penned love threads...enjoyed it lady!!
Margherita
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6 posted 2009-08-26 11:19 AM


Dear D., thank you, you are so lovingly creative also in your replies


scorchedpen
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7 posted 2009-08-26 12:25 PM


Beautiful and inspiring I love your creative insight.
jbstillwater
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8 posted 2009-08-26 01:23 PM


A beautiful combination of spiritual and physical love.

Much enjoyed, my friend!

Jan

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9 posted 2009-08-26 04:27 PM


Margherita...Great write. Words of a love bigger than the galaxies can hold...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-27-2009 07:31 AM).]

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-08-26 05:20 PM


Margherita - I sense so much inside you, and you write words of it well. Very nice write...

BC

Heart2Heart
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11 posted 2009-08-26 05:26 PM


Our lady of poetry is back, and with what an enchanting poem !!!!  Truly exquisite poesy dear Margherita, I have missed your happy presence and bright aura here the past few weeks.
Love
Katriona   

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12 posted 2009-08-26 07:32 PM


a pleasure to read of this love space...James
Marchmadness
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13 posted 2009-08-26 07:50 PM


I like Linda's title, "Te Queen of Cosmic Love" It fits so beautifully.
                                 Ida

Margherita
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14 posted 2009-08-26 11:50 PM


Dear scorchedpen, thank you for reading and commenting so kindly.

Thank you, dear Janet, for capturing the universality of this love.

Paul dear, thank you so much for your most beautiful comment. It made my heart smile, you got that right.

Dear Bill, your sensitivity shows through your kind words, thank you so much.

Thank you, dear Katriona, for welcoming me back with such heartwarming words and for  appreciating my poem. It feels so good to find you in here too!

Dear James, I enjoy your visits to my poetic threads. Thank you so much.

Dear Ida, you and Linda bring smiles of joy with your warm and heartfelt comments. Thank you and hugs.

Love and joy to all.
Margherita  

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15 posted 2009-08-27 06:50 AM


Beautiful!!

Love,
Eric

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16 posted 2009-09-07 08:20 PM


beautiful imagery, a devistating poem!!!!
LindsayP
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17 posted 2009-09-08 01:26 AM



You are life’s most exciting manifestation
and nothing compares to the pleasure
of those moments when we spread our wings
to fly in untold heights together
in impalpable butterfly lightness
through pure elemental love space.


Beautiful words exquistively put dear

Margherita, you excelled yourself with this great post. Take care, love you.

Lindsay

Margherita
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18 posted 2009-09-08 05:59 AM


Thank you, dear Eric, for coming in here for a moment to read and comment.

Dear GBride, thank you for bringing this one back with such a lovely comment, I had pleasure myself in reading it again ... and oh, that ache of pan flutes is just flooding me again!!

Dear Lindsay, I am always happy when you read and enjoy my poems. Thank you so much.

Love and have a happy day all,
Margherita


Prasad Nataraj
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19 posted 2009-09-08 06:37 AM


Beautiful colours and tender yet powerful words go with. Such pleasant read...

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

brneyedgrly
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20 posted 2009-09-08 04:29 PM



You are the ethereal footprints
upon the highest crests of waves
of the all knowing endless ocean
where the unique song of our story
is recorded by the touch of winds
and played just for us forever and ever.
___________________

(if I have to pick just one)  

I love your writing..every time

       


2islander2
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21 posted 2009-09-08 04:43 PM


Hello Margherita, your words fly too, very high, your poem hypnotized me while reading....What a moment.

yann

jbstillwater
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22 posted 2009-09-10 02:27 PM


What can I possibly say that has not already been said about this incredible poem?  It is just magnificently gorgeous, Margrit.  I felt electricty in each line.  Perfetc

Huggs
Jan

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23 posted 2009-09-10 05:21 PM


everyone took my words away ......


ARCTIC WIND

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24 posted 2009-09-10 07:21 PM


liked it
Margherita
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25 posted 2009-09-11 11:01 AM


Dear Prasad, Shellie, Yann, Janet, Michael and Vandana, thank you from my heart for your very kind comments. So nice to see you visiting my thread.

Love,
Margherita

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