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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-08-25 07:39 AM


there were those days of watercolor lucidity
almost agonous weaving of knowing and learning
when we were biblical in our sampling of forbidden
and the residue that would mark us as mortal after

on occasion we were alone in the darkness there
just reaching under each other's precautions
with our eyes open and hoping to see more
of those places where sinsations sizzled wanton

and then on the other side of our fountain of coins
we were high noon obvious in our bold adventures
nearly nude of consideration for the eyes that pry
but our own were always closed, blindfolded prevention

from what it was that made us weak enough for addictions
when we displumed our tattooed gauzy causes
and fleered in the face of the busy body god
just to weave again our sighed for eyes armor

from the dampened bamboo that grew within our wounds

______________

daark (do of sand)

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1 posted 2009-08-25 11:04 AM


I am liking this sandy series.  

Alison

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-08-25 03:01 PM


ms ali-san, thanks babe
Margherita
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3 posted 2009-08-25 05:24 PM


"watercolor lucidity" how beautiful!

And again the whole poem is spellbinding.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-08-25 07:08 PM


thanx ms mar...you are a blessing as always
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