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Tomer
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0 posted 2009-08-24 08:13 PM




He sat staring
With his chin thrust in ice
On the wood carved bench
As the people with shopping bags
And backpacks scaled along
The townÕs sidewalks.

Sitting and waiting,
Staring and fidgeting,
Listening for the hint
Of a childÕs scream
Or a willow branch falling from the high oak tree;
But it wasnÕt to be.

It was a passive sigh
Like his shadow that
Watched the baby stroller roll by,
Rolling along the soft space
That saw his feet rest alongside the ants scattering inside the cracks.

His eyes began to become a fixture
Amongst the dusk that ensued;
So the cars kept moving
But he never moved.

Never could he jot his eyes
Through a novels carefree mood,
Or share his thoughts with the planes
That moved.

He was idle,
Idle with the blue street blues.


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1 posted 2009-08-25 07:59 AM


Nice descriptive writing Tomer .... will definitely have to search more of you
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