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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-08-24 08:25 AM



Sudden apparations
storm the shutters
of "once that time"

our rhymes revived
intrinsically poetic
born to nocturnal highs
(for now)

as the haze
leaves the hinges

the flatlines
rewind

and blues borrow
browns, ink leaks
on artic waters

your image sketched
haphazzard in attempt

i strain to touch
a face within the
given finds

but i'm craving
your colors through
the filter of morning

when the night
becomes starless
its echo is blind

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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
1 posted 2009-08-24 08:27 AM


Beautiful colors in your writing, inked.

when the night
becomes starless
its echo is blind


Very cool.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-08-24 08:28 AM


Oh, dear Michele, how absolutely delightful!

A wonderfully expressed craving!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-08-24 11:44 AM


Good morning, Goddess!

"but i'm craving
your colors through
the filter of morning"

~ I'd know that those were your words, anywhere! ~ and that, my dear MicheleRose, is a GOOD THANG!!!

Your book, is a timeless treasure!



Linda

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2009-08-24 01:08 PM


Hope those colours are bright as the warming sun!  : )


   Ct

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