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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2009-08-24 06:13 AM


Come lay with me tonight,
All night, under moonlight
And twinkling starlight.
We’ll watch through my window,
From shadow, till tomorrow,
Then there’ll be my sorrow
When you fade into the way
As my dreams slip away
And you’re gone for the day.

Gloom


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-08-24 08:19 AM


Wonderfully melancholic, dear Professor.

To share the night in this way is such a gift.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-08-24 11:49 AM


Professor! You're back~ ~ professing your love for a nymph of the night!

"Then there’ll be my sorrow
When you fade into the way
As my dreams slip away
And you’re gone for the day"

~ Oh, but to return for another night. The mind is a powerful thing.


EA


Toccatta
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since 2009-07-08
Posts 26

3 posted 2009-08-25 07:43 PM


Under the stars... the second part of this reminds me of how shoting stars fade away.  
Nice writing, but a little sad.

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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Mobile, AL
4 posted 2009-08-25 11:10 PM


It certainly has been a long time!

Enjoyed reading your work again!


Jenn

"Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me"

Jewel

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2009-08-26 07:35 AM


Don't you just hate when

"dreams slip away"

(I try to pocket them~~ at least for a day or two)

M

scorchedpen
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since 2009-08-26
Posts 5
Norfolk, England
6 posted 2009-08-26 12:17 PM


simply magical !
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
7 posted 2009-08-27 12:29 PM


Thank you all for taking the time
to read and respond.

Gloom

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