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0 posted 2009-08-23 10:58 PM


Ripple, ripple, sway, sway
Undulating waterway
River of the night's dark day
Ripple, ripple, sway, sway.

Hear the wind as it goes
Whistling nightwind as it blows
Cross the ripples feel it flow
Through the moonshine flying low.

See the ground of solid worth
Umber heartstrings of the Earth
Emanating gentle mirth
Since the world's unfathomed birth.

Flickering fire, leaping dame
always dancing, never tame
twisting in its firey game
feel the fire, dance the flame.

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1 posted 2009-08-23 11:56 PM


Feel the fire, dance the flame

I loved this line

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