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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-08-23 02:15 PM


Bitterness

Plaguing one after another,
darkness is just at the corner.
Why be so harsh to each other,
for bitterness is not welcome.
Why so much hate in the world?


Lana

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-08-23 02:19 PM


Lana, what a sweet write. I couldn't agree with you more.

I see you more as a "Bright" Star!

Giving you a warm hug and a broad smile,



EA

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2 posted 2009-08-23 09:40 PM


There is a lot of bitterness, Lana! Thanks for bringing this to our attentions.


ARCTIC WIND

Oklahoma Rose
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3 posted 2009-08-24 05:00 PM


The world would be a whole lot better place, if there was just more love in it.
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4 posted 2009-08-24 05:13 PM


nice
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