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MorningStar
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since 2009-10-26
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Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2009-11-07 11:45 PM



Just like I knew it would
It was there
waiting for me

Beyond the velvet rope
Through a darkened passageway
A revolution
A freedom
The music pushed against me
like the touch of an eager lover
I could feel it on my skin - like a hot, dry wind
So I closed my eyes and let it ride
Fast then slow - then back again
The rhythm carrying my emotions out

No I don't want to dance with you...
But yes you can watch...
My liberation
My release

It was Friday night and the moon was high
So I put on my party dress
so I could dance
dance
dance




If I don't say it...who will?

[This message has been edited by MorningStar (11-08-2009 01:05 AM).]

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1 posted 2009-11-08 12:43 PM


Absolutely the very best thing for a person!  Wish I was tagging along.  I dance alone sometimes just for exercise and the heck of it.  It's a great release.  Nicely done MorningStar
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-11-08 01:16 AM


Sounds like fun to me. Carry on.
                           Ida

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2009-11-08 01:30 AM


Dancing is wicked fun.


I'd have asked you to dance if was there. I wouldn't have been wearing my party dress though, so chances are you'd have shot me down.


Great write. I know the feeling.

Keep writing.


Paul

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2009-11-08 08:58 AM


Very nice! You got talent, girl.  I am in a dancing mood too!

Love,
Margherita

vandana
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5 posted 2009-11-08 12:06 PM


nice
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
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6 posted 2009-11-10 04:21 PM


I'm sorry I haven't welcomed you and introduced myself as of yet. First things first, wonderful write. Also, Welcome to Pip!


ARCTIC WIND

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