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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-08-22 12:04 PM



When the reality meets the myth,
the spirit wakes up in a new way,
sunny San Francisco welcomes us
the opened arms, musicians on quays,
percussions which cross you,
would that be more than life?
The happiness to have reached one’s goal.
Our journey is called ” the others “,
San Francisco breathes under the big blue sky.

© Copyright 2009 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-08-22 12:12 PM


Yann! You're on the same continent as me, now! (I live in Canada). Welcome to North America! lol

Your beaming words radiate sunshine and happiness! I have a great big smile across my face! You often have a way of doing that with your delightful poetry and comments to my own.

Enjoy your visit!



Linda

2islander2
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2 posted 2009-08-22 12:20 PM


Hello Linda, I am so sad it isn't, I use the present in arrival at san francisco but it is the same journey of 1995 that goes on on the web...I didn't know you were from canada, I never visited it except Niagara and should try to do it...BRRRR, I would like there are no planes, I am so scared.

regards

yann

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-08-22 12:40 PM


Yann, Niagara Falls, Canada is where I was born!


Linda

Heart2Heart
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4 posted 2009-08-22 03:34 PM


San Francisco breathes under the big blue sky, yes I would believe so !  It is so nice to follow you on your journeys through the US Yann
Katriona

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5 posted 2009-08-28 01:42 PM


San Francisco looks lovely dressed in your words, dear Yann!

Love,
Margherita

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6 posted 2009-08-28 03:22 PM


"The other's?" not sure what this is all about, sounds like maybe your in some kind of instrumental group maybe? Just curious...but sure enjoyed the read of this...I got close once but have never been to San Francico, it does sound wonderful given the images in this....enjoyed....ps
2islander2
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7 posted 2009-08-28 04:16 PM


thanks Katriona for the kind and sweet comment.

have a nice day
yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2009-08-28 04:17 PM


Hey Linda, you are born in such a place, may be you can understand some french words: vous êtes une personne charmante.

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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9 posted 2009-08-28 04:18 PM


Thanks Margherita for the kind comment. San francisco is overwhelming.

yann

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10 posted 2009-08-28 04:20 PM


Hello PS, whatever it means the important is the sense you give to it, everyone has his read and that enlightens poetry, your definition are accurate....Thanks for reading and commeting the poem.
have  a nice day

yann

Prasad Nataraj
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11 posted 2009-08-28 11:46 PM


Another leaf from your travel log Yann, San Francisco looks great painted in your words.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Toccatta
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12 posted 2009-08-29 01:37 AM


I like reading about your travels!  It makes me want to hop aboard and travel too!

                Toccatta

2islander2
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13 posted 2009-08-29 01:54 AM


thanks prasad for the warm comment, touched me.

have  a nice day

yann

2islander2
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14 posted 2009-08-29 01:56 AM


Thanks Toccata, this was a so great journey, you make me wish to hop aboard again.

have  a nice day

yann

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