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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-08-22 08:19 AM

A singsong's rendition
rings the chimes to our
final few, the nights
jurisdiction over simultaneous
sighs, unlocking of lips
leaves on the loose, claimed
by the labor day sweepers

extending their shadows
the bursting of white
over greys of the highway
to their hideaway haven
allude to southern flight

though this, an allegory of
better days, end of days

in a champagne toast
(forsaking the glass)

my east to your west

our echoed goodbye.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-23-2009 03:38 PM).]

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-08-22 02:03 PM

May I just whisper "beautiful" and will you hear it? Consider the whisper sent your way.

A

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

2 posted 2009-08-22 03:32 PM

A very lovely and dreamy poem, a delightful free style write.
Heart2Heart

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-08-25 05:03 PM

Dear Michele, you always elicit sighs of admiration in me.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-08-25 07:12 PM

ms inki..you make east and west the same side of any street...in a lovely way

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-08-25 07:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

6 posted 2009-08-25 08:08 PM

Absolutely beautiful!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2009-08-25 08:46 PM

Love the visuals, your choice of words and the heartfelt sentiment.

Good on ya, goddess!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-08-25 09:32 PM

inkedgoddess - yep, you are a magnificent writer...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2009-08-26 12:33 PM

thank you so much for stopping by

ESHA SEN GUPTA
Member

since 2009-09-01

Posts 108
Maharashtra,India

10 posted 2009-09-25 10:17 PM

Your poems make me yearn for more.

Love Esha.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2009-09-26 01:23 PM

thank you Esha

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2009-09-27 01:04 PM

very nice

larzana
Member

since 2009-09-17

Posts 55

13 posted 2009-09-27 01:35 PM

Exquisite.

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