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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. You know Somehow I don’t buy into All this Boohoo poetry Otherwise Why is it Whenever I go For groceries I always Have to Stand in line . |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
Yah, why is it we always have to stand in line? Come on bosses, hire some of those unemployed people we are always reading about in the newspapers. Twenty customers waiting to buy and two checkstands open. And what's with all this boohoo poetry? Go out people and get a life. A nice write! |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Hmmm interesting comments in this john. I'm not sure I quite understand what you mean by "buying into" Do you feel someone is trying to trick you John? I am a big fan of your writing but I feel this one isn't up to your usual standard. It's almost as if you were just trying to make a statement about something and you just cut the sentence out after a couple of words so that it resembles a poem. My God bless you and all your little wishes come true. Yoin Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin |
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