Open Poetry #45 |
amber setting sun |
Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
amber setting sun, gentle winds blow in And stir me about. memories, like leaves, rustle despite my attempts at burning, they flit and float about on this cool fall day. |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
I don't know about you, but memories come to me with no reason. Just all of a sudden one pops up. Is that what you are writing about: the memories rustling like leaves. I've read and commented on your stuff before and I will be doing so again. You always have something interesting to think about. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Yep you got it.memories rustling about. thanks for your reply. Yoin |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Short but very descriptive. I love it. Its what I am trying to do these days since I tend to write long. "Its gonna be alright cause I'm okay with me" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very well said, dear Yoinn. Memories are of a very resistant matter I would say. Love M |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
wicked sweet. despite my attempts at burning. impressive. truly. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
My opinion is that a mark of a good poet is one who can say a lot with only a few words. "memories, like leaves, rustle despite my attempts at burning," --you definitely accomplished that here. |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
absolutely wonderful. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some memories just don't seem to burn, Yoin. Lovely. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You paint a lovely Autumn picture my friend with very few words. well done. Take care. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Breathtaking!!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
yoin, you are a magician of words and emotions...Keep on the good work my friend. regards yann |
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