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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2009-08-20 02:03 PM



It was not the rain that fell
upon the hard, dry earth,
but I, who made
the squash vines happy

It was not the blistering days,
nor the arid wind,
but I, who made
the corn stalks sad

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© Copyright 2009 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
GBride
Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

1 posted 2009-08-20 08:07 PM


Lot's of interesting images.
A nice tight write!

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
2 posted 2009-08-20 08:40 PM


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Very very good Larry

With your permission
would like to add this to my
Word file of poems by others

Again very very good

John


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-08-21 12:42 PM


I guess we do reap what we sow. Only us gardeners know for sure.
                               Ida

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
4 posted 2009-08-21 08:37 AM


(((Gbride)))   (((Huan Yi)))  (((Ida)))

thanks for stopping by

Huan Yi, of course you have my permission.
I am honored by your request.
You are one of my absolute favorites here.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2009-08-21 08:58 AM


Uriah...the sparse gentle touch here is amazing..serious cool stuff
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