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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-08-19 07:38 AM


we were devil may care perhaps we said
but who cares if the devil cares
keep him guessing like all of the others
who are pretending to be windows in the walls

it was those meander cans that we opened
the ones without labels that we moved around
because the liquids inside made those sounds
and we wanted to get them all over us slowly

we walked between tree people roadways
and stopped to press our mouths just to lips
not intending kisses to occur so willingly
but our hands made us do some things accidental

when we had our eyes closed and were not looking
______________

daark (forbidden)

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-20-2009 07:32 AM).]

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1 posted 2009-08-22 05:49 AM


Daark One,

This reads best if I whisper as I read it.

A

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-08-22 06:27 AM


ms ali-san...shhhhhh thank you
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3 posted 2009-09-21 01:16 PM


and stopped to press our mouths just to lips
not intending kisses to occur so willingly
but our hands made us do some things accidental

when we had our eyes closed and were not looking

I love this!!! *S* So glad I meandered in... to saunter out with a smile. *G*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-09-21 02:33 PM


ms suthern..oh stop that..you know that wicked saunter of yours drives me nuts, thanks babe
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2009-09-21 04:39 PM


mmmm.... oh so nice Mr Daark... oh so nice!

Bisous de Paris
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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