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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-08-19 06:20 AM

You smile and wave
a crystal blue ocean swell.
Laugh a female laugh,
because I danced
in a public place.

You make conversation
out of threaded pipes,
connecting us effortlessly
with just a spin
of clean fingers.

I smile,
showing the yolk
that I tried so hard to hide.

________________
Bad Habits. (series)
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2009-08-19 07:39 AM

this works!! enjoyed it

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-08-19 10:32 AM

thanks man.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-08-19 09:08 PM

don't hide that yolk!

then the girls won't see

what a good egg you are

.

flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted
~ L. Hall

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2009-08-19 10:06 PM

Extremely clever. What an outstanding mind you have VM.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

5 posted 2009-08-19 10:27 PM

Thanks TD.

I've never got that 'un before. It's a nice compliment, though.

Glad you liked it.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (08-19-2009 11:00 PM).]

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

6 posted 2009-08-20 06:05 AM

Brown eyes, I'm an oval egg, that's all.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2009-08-20 01:07 PM

This is one time where I wouldn't mind the 'yolk' to be on me. Sorry, for my sick joke! Your poetry has a tendency to bring that side out of me at times.

I enjoy the buffet your poetry offers!

Linda

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2009-08-21 06:00 AM

I like your jokes, Linda.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2009-08-22 05:58 AM

This reads as an intimate peek into the window that you hold up to us. I like what I see - and I think this is fine writing.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

10 posted 2009-08-22 10:22 PM

I think you are too kind to me, Allaboo.

Far too kind.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

11 posted 2009-08-24 12:34 PM

I think you are wrong.

A

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

12 posted 2009-08-24 06:09 AM

Yeah, well, uh.... I'm right, cuz I'm bigger n' you n' stuff.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2009-08-24 05:18 PM

this cracks me up
in a good way
very groovy

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

14 posted 2009-08-24 09:08 PM

Glad you like it.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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