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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
The Day Sun rises, cresting the waning moon Shadows frame a ship that has set sail East meets west having come full circle Dusk slowly fades darkening its hours And the wind whispers to the sun, "we have fullfilled another day." |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
I like this one a lot. It is short and simple but expresses complex ideas. Good Job!!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely thoughts, Peaceseaker. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Who needs a graphic when you paint the picture so purely. I literally got little goosebumples when I read the closing lines ~ "And the wind whispers to the sun, "we have fullfilled another day."" ps, this was 'simply' perfect!   EA |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
GBride-I appreciate the compliment..thank you for reading...ps |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Earth Angel-awe..you are so kind to leave such a nice and very much appreciated compliment..glad you enjoyed my friend....huggs, peaceseaker |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Marchmadness-Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment....ps |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Now isn't that just the most gratifying words at end of day. So beautiful dear Janet, loved this one. Katriona |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
absolutely BEAUTIFUL!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so poetical, enjoyed a lot. yann |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
h2h, Roniece and islander...I thank you all so much for reading and leaving such nice compliments....so glad you enjoyed...ps |
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