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crosscountry83
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0 posted 2009-08-18 11:45 PM


I glance up at my dad.
I find his mind in mine.
Why can he act so sad?
Because high flies the time

Rileigh


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1 posted 2009-08-20 02:33 PM


Don't you love the titles to his assignments? They're an entertaining read all by themselfves! lol

Doing this lesson was harder that it first appeared to me.

I would appear that you managed to pull it off without a stitch!


Linda

crosscountry83
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2 posted 2009-08-20 08:14 PM


Why thank you! Kind of short though, I wish I had done something longer

Rileigh

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3 posted 2009-08-23 10:57 PM


I like it.  You can always go back and do another longer one if you want.

xoxoxo
Alison

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